Fragmentedvision's Reviews

[The Dest. of the World]

Too perfect.

It's almost as if...too much time has been spent on this?

I didn't like it, but I voted 5 and gave you ten out of ten. Why you ask?

Because I can respect how good this movie is, it just isn't to my tastes, and I found it very boring. The dull colours and script just meant that i didn't feel like continuing, so I closed it after the ice freeze thing.

Thanks for making it though, you are obviously very talented.

[(2004) The Klaymation]

Good

Sorry about 'wiping out' the last guys review (Mine will appear on the movie's page now) because it was so long and good and stuff
Anyway really nice movie, really funny too, but do you know what you should do> You should make one in which the blue guy makes a claymation with a blue guy in it making a claymation. In that guys movie, there is a blue guy making a clamation in it. Eventually it zooms out to either the first guy or even perhaps you, struggling to animate the tiny, tiny clay figures down below
That would be funny
JJ

["Rejected" Spoof]

hmmm

I didn't know you could spoof something which is meant to be funny... which rejected is...funny/

[Windows MME V 1.01]

shit, but

one thing made me lol. "windows preform an illeagal operation" Windows is American, not Japanese.

[Wonderland 3D RPG (fixed)]

You seem very happy with your graphics...

...and rightfully so, but keep in mind that gaming is not ALL about graphics. I espect how hard this must of been to make and how much time and effort you put into this, but that time and effort doesn't show if you don't check over the finished game as if you were someone playing your game. For instance the graphics and hard work are difficult to appreciate when there are spelling mistakes that seem to ruin the medieval(?) atmosphere of the game such as 'stopps'
Plus it is hard to fully appreicate the game when it just isn't that fun to play. I mean I feel bad saying this considering how much time you must have spent making this, but I think that time was spent MAKING it as opposed to THINKING about it. There just is a general lack of anything in it that would make anyone that interested in it. I mean, I played it 'till the end, and I will definately play part 2. I'm not saying it isn't playable, but you just need to obviously (I know it's been said a million times before) give more time to defeat enemies, make the game a little less systematic and linear, make it longer, create a better atmosphere by perhaps adding some eerie or even suitable music, and just generally tidy up the presentation a bit; the menu screen was particularly ugly. Also finally one thing I really didn't like about this game were the drawings of the characters like the trainer. Concindering all the time you spend on the overworld graphics, you could have spent more time drawing better, less child's cartoonish looking characters. Anyway, In conclusion, you are obviously a talented games maker, just keep at it and try and make games you would yourself be interested in playing, graphics aside, and also test your games before uploading them.

-JJ

omega3D responds:

...And you are obviously good at writing reviews. A bit hard to read, but I understood it. I am glad that you appreciate the fact that it took me forever to make this. However, the rest of the game was so bunched together that the other elements dissapeared. For example, the game I origionally made had somewhat of an HP bar, but I could not use it. Once I got hit, my health went down, but the bat was still there. Sorry I did not meet your expectations for a good game, but it seems as though my time is limited with school. I am 12 yrs. old in the 7th grade. Heh heh... never saw that one comin', huh? Well, thank you for the awesome review.

[Push the button]

That was the funniest thing ever!

The author must be amazing at doing things that are irrelevant but interesting nonetheless. "Too late to rectify your mistake now" Ha ha ha ha lol damn funny goodyeh...

Krakatoa responds:

Thank you. Twas as expected.